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:iconladyofsilver:
This was beautiful. I enjoyed reading every single word.

The overall theme of the poem is honestly unique and you presented it to us with remarkable detail. This poem is evoking--it creates vivid emotions and images in one's mind.

What really impressed me was your choice of words. Original and advanced, the vocabulary you have used has built such an awe-worthy piece.

I was...captivated, if you will and if there is such word by your rhyming. Even though missing in some lines, it dominates some others, thus being fully balanced.

All in all, this piece is astounding! You really got talent there!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate it :) Glad you like this work.

Also, thank you for the time you put in on this critique. :)
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:iconladyofsilver:
LadyOfSilver Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! ^^
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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